Aloha,!!
This week for writing my class has been working on our argument writing, This is so in the future if we ever need a persuasive writing piece we know how to write it and what are the expectations.
My groups argument was based on how can Jewelry affect our learning and comprehension. We think its unfair as girl to get told off for wearing jewelry but the boys have an advantage.
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Statements:
I truly believe that jewelry does not affect our learning because why can’t girls not be allowed to wear certain Jewelry but boys would be allowed to wear whatever they want and the teacher says nothing. But what I don’t understand is how jewelry has nothing to do with our learning. And I don’t think boys would get distracted.- Catherine
I strongly believe that the Jewelry we wear does not affect us in learning or our studies, I think it is very unfair how the girls get interrogated by the teachers to take their Jewelry out and saying its a distraction to the boys and yourself but when the boys walk into school with earring and necklaces they get to walk straight pass with no suspicion, So what I don’t understand is how does Jewelry affect us but is different when it comes to the boys? – Hineahuone.
I strongly believe that jewelry does not affects our learning because when we are struggling on a sentence or word we could just touch our jewelry and it could maybe give us a idea, I think it’s not fair when the teachers lets the boys pass by when they wear inappropriate clothing or jewelry but when us girls when we wear the smallest hoop earring we get told off as soon as we walk into the classroom. Or when we fidget with our jewelry we get told off for being distracted easily, but when the boys are more worried about their jewelry instead of their learning the teachers don’t care, it’s just like teachers like the boys more than girls.. – Susana
Conclusion:
In conclusion girls are better than boys because they can achieve high goals they set and get their life straight and manage their finances for the future.
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Nga Mihi Hineahuone